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Flencirose Basera

A Torch that Will Light Forever!

A dark cloud moves in and everything becomes sad!
At times a grey cloud shifts the moods of my life.
Greyness controls who I am now
I move into unknown areas that formed a part of my life!
You left with all your love!
One that was the defination of us!
Now we stand alone.
Individuals trying to piece it together!
Your love trailing between us!
Broken hearts trying to mend.
It seems like yesterday you were here,
Laughing and joking in your loving way!
You left with chunks of our hearts!
We try to hide the pain of loosing you,
As individuals then as a family!
You came into this world struggling before your time.
Accepted, loved and cared for by all!
You left the world struggling and too early.
Still dearly loved and missed by all that connected to you!
Your love is a torch that will shine forever in our hearts!

Submitted: Sunday, May 29, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, July 17, 2012

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My loving Little sister dearly missed and thought of! The mere thought of you doesnt bring sadness no more but a loving glow inside! Your life and love still reflect who we are today!
RIP 12/03/1973-04/07/2009

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