Tajudeen Shah

Veteran Poet - 1,393 Points (India.)

A Tranquil Morning. - Poem by Tajudeen Shah

Still and radiant backwater visage
Had adornments of morning majesty;
Fading off to the green inland.
Many a freshwater fish still in trance
By the mossy notch of water-cellars;
Their only not-so-safe shelter.
Tiny wooden snakes appeared
Rippling off the glossy, wave-less surface
On their course from the nocturnal labor.
Thin mist-veil slowly dropped on
The soft sod as the tender golden rays
Cast over the bright green leaves;
A celestial decree of scenic ecstasy!
Train still had her alert course
fleeing off such beautiful instances.
Acumen was found trampled
By the bare village feet since ages,
As the lilt of toil kept echoing ever.


Comments about A Tranquil Morning. by Tajudeen Shah

  • Gold Star - 9,885 Points Heather Wilkins (10/8/2013 7:06:00 PM)

    a journey on a train a nice ride good imagery. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,619 Points Valsa George (8/14/2013)

    A beautiful description of the train journey on a tranquil morning, enjoying the celestial scenic beauty! A lovely poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,391 Points Ramesh Rai (8/1/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    beautiful write. is it the same about which you have written on mine (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,781 Points Dave Walker (8/1/2013 1:56:00 PM)

    A good poem, great work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,393 Points Tajudeen Shah (8/1/2013 1:54:00 PM)

    reflections of a morning train journey to Trivandrum, the capital of the Kerala State. dear Poets, what do you say, if we post photographs too? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 3, 2013


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