Mohammed AlBalushi

Rookie - 148 Points (5/2/1973 / Muscat- Oman)

A Tree On The Other Side Of The Road - Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

A tree on the other side of the road
Big and branched
Green shining leafs
Shade stretch every where
Bird build happy nest
Summer sun raise burn it all
Autumn fail it to end
All left… its alone
Winter came fast
Burgeon start soon
Return life
Every one back
A tree on the other side of the road


Comments about A Tree On The Other Side Of The Road by Mohammed AlBalushi

  • (7/30/2013 8:29:00 AM)


    good imagery with deep meaning
    really enjoyed
    thanks for sharing
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  • (2/29/2012 4:23:00 AM)


    A nice figurative piece, thanks for sharing. You are a poet and as with all of us it is a journey of learning and developing our skills. Keep going. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/3/2010 2:30:00 AM)


    nice figurative.... loved it! (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (9/13/2009 4:56:00 AM)


    Seasoned seasonal poem...lovely (Report) Reply

  • (9/7/2009 7:04:00 PM)


    As you know I love nature and the way you have related the seasons through your tree is supurb congratulatios 10 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2009 6:59:00 AM)


    Every one back
    A tree on the other side of the road... beautiful write on other side of the road... it drawn my attention well to the theme..well done dear sir.....10
    there is only seasonal change rest it stands alone inmidst of life....

    read mine you go alone.......simple grace...miss i miss u
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  • (8/12/2009 5:27:00 AM)


    a nice metaphor of life and its various seasons! (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (8/10/2009 5:29:00 AM)


    This poem made me see the poem! (Report) Reply

  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (8/1/2009 11:43:00 AM)


    Great imagination and charisma! (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2009 5:44:00 AM)


    a wonderful poem in season. has a deep meaning on life too.
    voted10
    surya
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  • Nooruddeen Mm (6/23/2009 7:28:00 AM)


    Hi Dear
    You have described all the seasons in a few lines in a beautiful manner.
    The way of your presentation is excellent and of course the title, The Tree on ……., that withstand whole the seasons, attracts more.

    Good work.
    Thank you for sharing
    Noor
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  • (5/9/2009 8:29:00 AM)


    Nice poem here- must come to visit you often :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2009 8:17:00 AM)


    Capturing the seasons through the branches of a tree. Very lovely, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2009 2:50:00 AM)


    M agic spell
    o ften is created
    h appens in simplicity
    a fter a poem is read
    m oving with simplicity
    m akes a poetry
    a dorable to comprehend
    e ven it tells about simple things
    d escribed in simple ways
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  • (3/10/2009 2:50:00 AM)


    M agic spell
    o ften is created
    h appens in simplicity
    a fter a poem is read
    m oving with simplicity
    m akes a poetry
    a dorable to comprehend
    e ven it tells about simple things
    d
    (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2009 3:41:00 AM)


    I like the flow
    and it was so simple
    good write
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  • (3/2/2009 8:25:00 AM)


    A good write here. the tree witnesses everything that's happening around...always willing to 'give' whatever it has and never asking anything in return...Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (3/2/2009 7:22:00 AM)


    A natural landmark that witnessed many history, thats the tree! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/2/2009 6:32:00 AM)


    This tree is what we all need; and, it is about life.Thanks for sharing it with us.

    Bye.

    Edward Kofi Louis.
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  • (3/2/2009 5:55:00 AM)


    yes the tree is still there, alone excet it`s soul and feelings, ans it knews the canges of the surroundings and the feel its change sharing with unknown several friends, the tiny creaters like ant and birds and little paracites ans the wind ete, but we cant understand too much, thanks for showing the beautiful peaceful sacred tree, gave all good things to all, thanks a lot,10++++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 1, 2009



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