Florida Angel

Rookie (Spring / Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach)

A Will To Unit Venus And Mars - Poem by Florida Angel

I have decided to make my will and leave everything that I have to myself.
Mars is scheduled to come on August 27, to stay within 34.65 miles of earth,
Then he shall only return in 2287, by then I might be ready to rebirth,
As for 280 years shall be well enough for two lives thenceforth,
For which I shall save all that I have, as they say I am from Venus,
After all that travelling I shall be back around Earth for Mars to nest our hearth.

I will leave all my poems, love letters and everything else,
All the feelings I have, and all the secrets I have shared,
Please save them to yourself, as for I shall come back to collect.
Don’t waste any time crying as I know time is rare nowadays,
Just go rush and be aware that I won’t have a penny to spare,
I shall save everything for myself because I won’t waste a day,
On August 27 I shall be here ready for Mars,
and on 2,287, back again for we shall have our MAR GRASS.


(August 19,2007)


Comments about A Will To Unit Venus And Mars by Florida Angel

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (1/23/2008 4:28:00 PM)

    Wishing you a successful trip but don't stay so long. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Brian Mills (9/21/2007 4:18:00 PM)

    slightly sad poem here Karina......i get the analogies that you decided to use.....trust me my dear......no need to wait till 2287......'your love is here........that i can atest.......just open what lies beneath your chest! ! '

    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Broken Peaces (8/22/2007 3:43:00 AM)

    Venus and Mars interesting bed partners, you say your leaving nothing
    to anyone you already have, memories.10 Bon voyage Chris x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Chris Mendros (8/20/2007 3:18:00 PM)

    Amusing, and charming.
    Have a nice trip!
    Don't forget to write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marci Made (8/18/2007 8:34:00 PM)

    have fun Karina.~~~marci. :) ~~ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 18, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 29, 2011


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