(Spring / Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach)

What do you think this poem is about?

Addicted I became…CHOCAHOLIC

Why?
- You won’t Understand…
Why?
- It doesn’t matter to you…
Why?
- One day you will find out..
Why?
- Your are too young now..
Why?
- Stop being silly?
Why?
- Grow UP!
Why?
- You are such a child!
Why?
- Stop acting like a kid?
Will you then give me the reason so I can understand WHY you say that I can’t?
- Oh Shut UP! You are not a grown-up…
Why?
- Go away, here, go buy some candies...

(That’s how I became addicted to Chocolates and Ice Cream.
- WHY Couldn’t grown-ups just explain things?)

Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, March 30, 2011


Comments about this poem (Addicted I became…CHOCAHOLIC by Florida Angel )

Enter the verification code :

  • Raveendran . (11/3/2007 5:19:00 AM)

    You are sensitive and industrous, a writer in her workshop!

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • BEAU GOLDEN (10/3/2007 4:40:00 AM)

    C.A.-Chocoholics anonymous- 'Hi my name is beau and I'd beat your ass for a milky way bar'. it's been 3 days since my last M and M.....' I enjoyed what you wrote about above Karina.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Duncan Wyllie (9/3/2007 12:51:00 PM)

    Ah, after writing my poem about the subject of chocolate I realise that people use it for all kinds of reasons, some to escape, some to feel good, some because they just like the sugary tastes, ,
    All the best
    Love duncan X

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Lee Degnan (9/1/2007 4:28:00 PM)

    Yeah, can totally relate... there should be a Chocaholic's Anonymous.
    Hi, my name is Lee...
    I enjoyed this very much, thanks for sharing it!
    Hugs,
    Lee

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Meggie Gultiano (8/24/2007 11:06:00 PM)

    why, o why i cant resirt reading this? it's about chocolates and my doctors didnt want me to eat chocolates? ..wow, Karina, you have me satisfied my thirst for eating just by reading this nice work of yours..love it..!

    hugs, Meggie

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Marci Made (8/20/2007 6:45:00 PM)

    Every kid's most favorite word WHY and NO...Chocolate, OMG, would die had it never been invented and caffine too and in a different vein, babies brand new and all children period....Couldn't have made it this far without any of them...interesting write...you're writing lots I see, as I've also been doing...Though all my names are gone today down below where it says People Who Read...Also Read, there were about 16 and now all gone...Guess that means no one's been reading, but if that's the case why are there pages of comments in my comments every day? Oh well, another PH mystery, just like people, change without rhyme or reason...marci. :) ~~

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 6 comments »
[Hata Bildir]