A Wishing Dream Poem by Antonio Liao

A Wishing Dream

Rating: 5.0


hello! what time is it now, the step that wake every
awaken sleep, a sweet hello in the pillow as the blanket
cover its feet, and shame touches the toughest skin
flatten

clock, sound is not the same, and the morning cockle
with the crows of the early dine, the zooming wings
whisper the shading clouds in the splendid blue sky,
the wait is over

color my dream and paint with the arrow of the rainbow
of the cherry blossom and the red carpet of the harmony
reaches to the seven heaven, where the falling star,
capture the journey of where to begin

listen as i draft, the beginning of my stay, sculpt and nothing
will stay with a pieces of memory that i was once in your
dream painting the years of today, tell me then, that worth
comes one more in the painted design of my love in your
awakening moment with me

and as tomorrow shall be, coming to stay, in the great
design, it would be the precious beginning of my life
in a painted eternity.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2009

and as tomorrow shall be, coming to stay, in the great design, it would be the precious beginning of my life in a painted eternity....... a beautiful dreams wished with lovely imagination.. i liked it most as it was well judged and thought over dream... so nice poem....10 read mine all drams not come true....

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Kesav Easwaran 09 October 2009

'color my dream and paint with the arrow of the rainbow of the cherry blossom and the red carpet of the harmony reaches to the seven heaven, where the falling star, capture the journey of where to begin'... nice imageries there Anto...very poetic

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Catrina Heart 30 September 2009

a wishing dream, a rich colorful wishes done in a very nice poetic monologue....Loved it!

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Joseph Poewhit 30 September 2009

Words are full of many colors

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