Absent Presence Poem by Suraj Samtani

Absent Presence

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You've dangled one-too-many carrots, yet offered none for a taste.

You've shown many-a-glimpses, yet never revealed the whole.


You've made one-too-many vows, yet adhered to none.

You've made many-a-speeches, yet never walked along your talk.


You've phoned me many-a-times, yet never received mine.

You've received many-a-letters, yet answered to none.


You've made one-too-many attempts, yet never quite succeed at any.

Your body's made many-an-appearances, yet your soul's presence was always absent.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 30 June 2008

Hey, This is a beautiful poem-- i like the sequences that follow one after another. Great writing Suraj --keep it up! ! ! ! ! . Start smiling. regards,

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Hayley Johnson 14 May 2008

i love this , most of all the form nice word choice

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