Gorgeous and short;
who'd have thought
you'd still be here now.
It goes so fast;
a cannon blast -
without a thought to how.
A glittering jewel
for a wittering fool,
Yet a love to win all wars.
Cliché it seems,
But in all my dreams
I'm forever and only yours.
I liked this very much! It flowed so well. I loved the rhyme scheme you used. Very nice job, :) Just a little question. You meant 'withering' instead of 'wittering', perhaps?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great...one loved it and rate it beyond 10 thanx for sharin and for all troubles and problems...there is an end...so stay kool koni