ramesh rai

Gold Star - 19,451 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Aches Of Life - Poem by ramesh rai

Fish swims enthusiastically in water
The duck gazes meditatively at swimming fish
Both lust for long life

Comments about Aches Of Life by ramesh rai

  • Freshman - 661 Points marvin brato (11/1/2013 2:52:00 AM)

    Meaningful....life is survival. Congratulation for wining the recent contest sir, you deserved it! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 512 Points Lenny Camacho (10/24/2013 1:51:00 AM)

    I see the irony: both long for a long live, however, only one will survive the encounter; one becomes ethereal, the other remains terrenal. Balance and Chaos (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,247 Points Valsa George (9/29/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    The thought whether we will live long or die prematurely remains an ache with most humans as well as other creatures! A cute little poem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,014 Points Yasmeen Khan (9/24/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    All creatures love life and death is as horrible for them as for us, nice write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Chukwuma Ndububa (9/22/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    A literary maxim as painted by a wordsmith. Poetry really adorns existence. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (9/14/2013 5:16:00 PM)

    just as us humans we all want a long and eventful life. nice write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,003 Points Hazel Durham (9/13/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    So true we all wish for a long and happy life!
    Lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,231 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/12/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    Beautiful images creating deep impressions in the mind. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,927 Points David Wood (9/10/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    Delightfully short but sweet and true. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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