Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Achiever


I acknowledge the outcome of efforts
May be it is possible with little support
In case of no moral support what it could be?
Will it be considered as downfall of big tree?

Person who is seized with problems may excel
In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail
Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain
Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain

Person who succeeds is called achiever
Not necessarily he should be firm believer
Should act as master of events and healer
Nothing alters path as ……………….

What are the essential qualities of person?
Should he be master player in all the seasons?
Who can turn the tide and steer the course
Not loosing hope while facing the remorse

Be attentive to others and good listener too
Neither impose will not attempt to woo
Success may have its own way and story
Praises from all thus adding to glory

It’s very hard to pursue goal in adversity
Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity
Bold approach with strong resolve and good quality
Ultimately may earn you respect without any pity

Even what seems to be a difficult task?
Will be made easy and no one may ask
You will have your own way of dealing
Enough energy if required for wound healing

Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal
No one can steal the show or put the seal
At the end of journey, luck may smile
Pain may subside even when you walk for while

Submitted: Sunday, September 27, 2009
Edited: Friday, June 24, 2011

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  • Kaa.na. Kalyanasundaram (3/18/2010 6:00:00 AM)

    Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal
    No one can steal the show or put the seal
    At the end of journey, luck may smile
    Pain may subside even when you walk for while

    Good ending. Unless a commitment to work and taking risk and responsibilities the achievement will not be attained. Good writing.
    best wishes: Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram. (Report) Reply

  • Chand Shikari (11/7/2009 7:27:00 PM)

    Person who is seized with problems may excel
    In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail (Report) Reply

  • Natasha Rathod (11/7/2009 7:17:00 PM)

    I acknowledge the outcome of efforts
    May be it is possible with little support
    In case of no moral support what it could be?
    Will it be considered as downfall of big tree? (Report) Reply

  • Collins Nkemjika Nzomuche (11/7/2009 6:37:00 AM)

    I stongly agree with you that in every success there is a commitment. That is as saying that any honour that involves no risk is not worthy to be called honour.Your poem is an inspirator to those who wishes to excel in life without considering the amount of risk involved. I love this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Subbaraman N V (11/2/2009 11:28:00 PM)

    Yes; that indeed is an achievement! Achieving the unachievable and reaching the unreachable is indeed an ACHIEVEMENT! (Report) Reply

  • Emma_1221@list.ru Adamyan (10/11/2009 2:12:00 PM)

    Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity...
    I`m speachless.... that much i loved ur poem! really thanks for sharing, for the fountain of ur wisdom we are poured (Report) Reply

  • ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (10/11/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    oh thispoem spke to me much..truth and wisdom in it's beautiful verses..loved it..

    Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal
    No one can steal the show or put the seal
    At the end of journey, luck may smile
    Pain may subside even when you walk for while (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (10/11/2009 4:47:00 AM)

    Person who is seized with problems may excel
    In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail
    Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain
    Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain
    .........................
    Very well said..You are full of wisdom (Report) Reply

  • Nalini Hebbar (10/10/2009 7:39:00 AM)

    It’s very hard to pursue goal in adversity
    Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity
    Bold approach with strong resolve and good quality
    Ultimately may earn you respect without any pity...very true...beautifully rhymed...regards...thanks for your wonderful comments (Report) Reply

  • Indani Narayan (10/9/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain
    Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain (Report) Reply

  • Twiggy Tubercio (10/9/2009 10:22:00 PM)

    it seems as if you vent into your poetry, it's a lovely habit to have, I've noticed that when one vents, the most beautiful words come out (Report) Reply

  • Lalvani Rekha (10/9/2009 9:43:00 PM)

    I acknowledge the outcome of efforts
    May be it is possible with little support
    In case of no moral support what it could be? (Report) Reply

  • Vijay Suwarnkar (10/9/2009 7:39:00 PM)

    acknowledge the outcome of efforts
    May be it is possible with little support
    In case of no moral support what it could be?
    Will it be considered as downfall of big tree (Report) Reply

  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (10/9/2009 4:33:00 PM)

    ‘What human mind believes it can achieve’. Napoleon Hill

    ‘Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal’
    Dedication and zeal flows out from flood gate of belief.
    Zealously ten
    dr.sakti
    Cordially invite to read and comment on my poems (Report) Reply

  • Jigisha Vyas (10/8/2009 4:22:00 AM)

    In case of no moral support what it could be?
    Will it be considered as downfall of big tree? (Report) Reply

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