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Chand Shikari
(11/7/2009 7:27:00 PM) |
Person who is seized with problems may excel
In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail
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Natasha Rathod
(11/7/2009 7:17:00 PM) |
I acknowledge the outcome of efforts
May be it is possible with little support
In case of no moral support what it could be?
Will it be considered as downfall of big tree?
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Collins Nzomuche
(11/7/2009 6:37:00 AM) |
I stongly agree with you that in every success there is a commitment. That is as saying that any honour that involves no risk is not worthy to be called honour.Your poem is an inspirator to those who wishes to excel in life without considering the amount of risk involved. I love this poem.
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Subbaraman N V
(11/2/2009 11:28:00 PM) |
Yes; that indeed is an achievement! Achieving the unachievable and reaching the unreachable is indeed an ACHIEVEMENT!
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Emma Adamyan
(10/11/2009 2:12:00 PM) |
Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity...
I`m speachless.... that much i loved ur poem! really thanks for sharing, for the fountain of ur wisdom we are poured
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****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.. ((((((( SiLenCe)))))))
(10/11/2009 9:23:00 AM) |
oh thispoem spke to me much..truth and wisdom in it's beautiful verses..loved it..
Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal
No one can steal the show or put the seal
At the end of journey, luck may smile
Pain may subside even when you walk for while
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Meggie Gultiano
(10/11/2009 4:47:00 AM) |
Person who is seized with problems may excel
In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail
Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain
Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain
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Very well said..You are full of wisdom
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