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Yoseph Lupu

(1948 / Jassy (Iassy) , Romania)

Adam And Eve, Would You Belıeve?

Pardon madam,
I am Adam,
I look for Eve,
It is you, I believe?

I have her picture, you see her face,
Is like yours, in this case!
Yes, our smile are alike,
Even our dresses, are white!

So, maybe, I am Eve,
Would you believe?
So where have you been?
In the Thames basin?
I looked for you, everywhere,
With much love, and much care.

You had just vanished,
And I remained astonished !
What can I , Adam say ?
After loving you, day by day?

Dear Eve, tell me please,
What to do, in a moment like this?
To make you understand,
That I am for you .. here is my hand!

Maybe is it me, with my passion,
Or, maybe, just the occasion! ?

I remember that day, the apple,
That gave us knowledge, as in a fable,
To look at us, and see,
How life can be!

And how Venus , the beauty star,
Gave us a sweet kiss, being not so far,
And how God, may I say,
Said , that we must go away!

But now, as we are both, you and me,
Let's make our love, just be !
So our children , can say,
That life, isn't a play!

Submitted: Monday, June 06, 2011
Edited: Monday, June 06, 2011
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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (1/4/2012 4:36:00 AM)

    hahaha, i like this..
    all of us are paired, let us just find our match
    no matter how long the wait is
    we can still find one another

    wow...ten votes for you (Report) Reply

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