Treasure Island

SALINI NAIR

(kottayam)

Adieu


It's the time of his departure
A sense that take beneath the heart
Though it's for a short span
It made her lament and she faded

She roams around his whisper
His rays colored her awesome charm
In the quest to make her the majesty
His shine pellet on her gown

His love spread her charisma
If his eyes depart her face for sometime
She wears the gown that fades her allure
In that love shore it's the time of an adieu

His horizon was about to set
There his widen face turn orange
He sinks to her tears
As he don't want to depart her


At that lovely sunset they say adieu
His eyes need to adore her rear
For that love to grab
She start to roam around his whispers

The lord set his rays
But she chase him with all the vigor
Rather in that love shore they convene again
It was the start of a lovely dawn………..!

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Wednesday, July 16, 2014

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its about sun set, she for earth, he for sun, her tears refers to ocean, gown for nature

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  • Amitava Sur (7/19/2014 8:11:00 PM)

    A heart touching expression of sunset under the back drop of intense love.

    He sinks to her tears
    As he don't want to depart her....... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/17/2014 9:43:00 AM)

    Lovely love poem. Beautiful flow of words...It was the start of a lovely dawn………..!
    This means the new sun rising brings the hope of meeting again. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/16/2014 10:39:00 AM)

    Being thus disengaged they bid adieu with a view to meeting again..................very much symbolic of a quiet sunset................... (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (7/16/2014 3:08:00 AM)

    Love appears in many ways, the orbiting of earth around sun is also a love. a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (7/16/2014 3:07:00 AM)

    Love appears in many ways, the orbiting of earth around sun is also a love. a lovely write. (Report) Reply

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