elena winters

Rookie (august 11 / joliet illinois)

Affective - Poem by elena winters

Eyes of a crystal ball telling the untold
behold the truth which i try to withdrawl
that consience taunting me in the back of my mind

hence the word ventriloquist
with arms inside my back
don't motion my lips to speak against my will
for i will pay the consequences

so just let me be
let me suffer horridly
for good despite evil


Comments about Affective by elena winters

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/17/2008 8:33:00 AM)

    you said it right, Breeze...meaningful artful write...ten for you (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ron Flowers (12/16/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    I like this one very much. Let me be the first to give it a 10.

    Regards
    Ron (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 11, 2008



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