elena winters

Rookie (august 11 / joliet illinois)

A Cracked Heart - Poem by elena winters

no one can see me as i blend into the crowd
call me camouflage for i am invisible
yes.........invisible to the naked eye
i cry for attention from you and only you
what else do i possibly have to do
for you to acknowledge my presence
but then i realize something
we were never meant to be
my final move to walk pass you
smell my scent that swarms around you
close your eyes, inhale me, picture me
while i gaze at you from a distance
i finally turn to walk away
my feelings for you descend
i face the fact that my heart is cracked
and my love for you has end

Comments about A Cracked Heart by elena winters

  • Rookie Christopher Murphy (1/21/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    hits the spot.....only those who know this side of emotion can truly feel...brilliantly captured. well done. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Dr. Kolitha Lelwala (1/20/2009 6:02:00 PM)

    what a beautiful way to express untold love. But wonder why? ? ?
    Anyway, nicely composed, natural flow has decorated the rhythm.10+++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie sumaira .....ir (1/20/2009 2:04:00 PM)

    So beautifully write... Have deep emotion of love... I giv it +8 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eddie Roa (1/19/2009 9:40:00 PM)

    Unrequited love is a common theme but you treat rather uniquely with easy verse. good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points *Brad Combs* (The Igloo Pirate too) (1/19/2009 7:51:00 PM)

    i know the feeling, its one iv lived with forever, i hate being the outcast, who feels that love is not for u an it hurts alot, great work, has to be a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Laurena Willetts (1/17/2009 3:36:00 AM)

    beautiful, loved it.please read some of min
    have only just started witing.try innocence lost and fidelity
    pam (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Keith Hendrickson (1/13/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    wow this was a great piece. i cant wait to read more (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (1/10/2009 3:50:00 AM)

    A cracked heart will lead you to death. The End! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 9, 2009

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