Tribhawan Kaul

Freshman - 558 Points (01-01-1946 / Srinagar (J & K) India)

Afraid? - Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Air journey commences with bonhomie
Chatting, talking, surfing, eating
Check-in brings smiles
Boarding cards, glee
Security checks wrinkles the faces
Food courts presses these free
Anticipation gives way to curiosity
A child seeking answer to a query
Why, how, what, where, who? ? ? ? ?
Papa’s mind gropes for answers
Mama indulges in shopping spree
Shuttle bridges the gap
Between hope and realty
Boarding the craft in luxury
Settling down with great warmth
Hostess’s smile soothing the nerves
Quietness envelopes everyone
Captain’s words cautions
To take precautions
An eric silence follows
Taking off and landing
Feels like mourning
In a crematorium
Why so? I wonder!
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Comments about Afraid? by Tribhawan Kaul

  • Silver Star - 3,123 Points Bernard Snyder (9/8/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    Enjoyed this intriguing 'piece'. Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 633 Points marvin brato (10/2/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    Good narration, an interesting story poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Inas Essa (9/26/2013 1:45:00 PM)

    Nice poem, enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/13/2013 2:16:00 AM)

    good imagery, you capture it very detail
    good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (8/6/2013 1:16:00 PM)

    a nice description on a perfect flight to landing, An enjoyable read. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,885 Points Valsa George (8/6/2013 8:14:00 AM)

    The excitement and anxiety of an air travel! No matter how often one travels, take off and landing are a bit scary! Enjoyed this flight from the preliminary formalities of boarding a plane to the final halting! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 6, 2013

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