Roof-tops quickened
by juvenile shouts
kites are flying
against the sky
drawing strokes
of brilliant art
canvas sky
and artist breeze
changing patterns
now and then
flaked,
patched,
and barred clouds;
deep-delighting
wafts of breeze
fluttering, floating,
gliding birds;
haughty sun
is not so hot
throat of soil
is not so slaked
veins of leaves
are no more parched
peace-treaty
duly signed
between the heaven
and the earth,
life resurrected
after it rained!
life resurrected after it rained Beautiful development leading to the end. Please read my poem 'Drought Go Away' when you have time. Thank you.
Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better. Albert Einstein felt like i was the one who was experiencing it......brilliant ma'am
beautiful lines celebrating the arrival of much awaited rain. not a word outa place....lovely write superb read blessings in the rain drops
I love the smell of the earth after it has rained and watching the bird shake off the rain fall.
An absolutely beautiful poem Shahzia! Loved the verse 'kites are flying against the sky drawing strokes of brilliant art.' So very descriptive, I could just picture all the colors. Gave it a 10!
Wow..Wonderful write..Loved it.. How come I missed this beautiful write...
beautiful write enjoyed your write especially when it is raining now
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Some lovely images created by your words Shahzia, everywhere is always sweet and fresh following rainfall.