Again Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Again

Rating: 5.0


In a sacred temple of love,
I'll be making my nest again
Forgetting all my intense pain
As I'm free as an innocent dove

Fragant dreams bloom in my vale
From petal to petals they flitting
When her silent stare slitting,
My heart from her concealed veil

Let's forget the shadows of past
As life is an unpredictabl course
Let's forget our nugatory remorse
As time goes from us so fast

Wednesday, March 20, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 24 March 2013

Let 'fragrant dreams bloom in your vale'! ! Thanks for the beautiful comment on my poem!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 April 2013

Wow! I can feel your pain in this heartfelt poem, superb poem my friend. Siya_! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 April 2013

Wow! I can feel your pain in this heartfelt poem, superb poem my friend. Siya_! !

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Unwritten Soul 12 April 2013

Good to hear something new from you again you been hiding for so long Vipins, now you are here it was a poem with a scar..and we all see the pain what a heartfelt poem Vipins! Welcome back _Soul

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Hans Vr 11 April 2013

I like the hope and the readiness to forget the painful experiences from the past. Some people get so hurt that they cannot love again. Being in love is superb and gives us wings. But IN love is often a transient infatation and leaves one in a feeling of being lost and the other one more lost and in pain. If we can manage to find the love with big L, without the IN, we have something completely different. Not many people manage to replace the infatuation witht eh big L in a timely manner. The big L requires a lot of effort. Love with the big L is not so much a feeling dropping from the sky as it is a verb, an action, the performing of loving things and acts towards the one we Love. It requires a focus on the qualities and a willingness to not focus on shortcomings. All of us are weak in one or the other way. But all of us are also strong. The more we manage to find uncondtional love in our hearts to stronger we become. I wish you all the very best in your new sacred temple of love. Hans

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Neethu Prasanna 27 March 2013

What a wonderful poem! I love it

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