Air, Water, Fire Poem by T.James Becker
Air, Water, Fire
Standing high on the rocky mountain top
She stands mesmerized by the beauty below
A sea of trees and fields spread out before her
Like the strokes from an ole masters brush
Finely painted with textures and colors of nature
Sweet Smells waft through the air assaulting the senses
Essence of pine meadowland and wildflowers
Raising her arms in the air as a goddess in worship
Turning her face to the sun, rays dare to kiss her cheek
Soft blue dress swirling around her in the breeze
Wind caressing her bronze skin tenderly like a lover
Birds sing her praises and angels lend her wings
Turning to face me, my heart races and falters
She smiles, I catch my breathe and gasp for air
Her touch is a fire that only she can quench
As our lips meet, I am no longer solid mass
I am air, water, fire; I am all things for her
A masterpiece not only as an artist with the brush but also with the pen. I like this one a lot well done.10/10 Regards Dave T
immensely b'ful expressions n u got better words to express them......i jus luved it.......thanx a lot! ! !
Beautiful and so perfectly descriptive that I felt like I was there. Thank you for sharing this with us!
I am air, water, fire; I am all things for her ............................................................. T, Very beautiful poem.... with graceful metaphors... You have delicately conceded your of favourite the fourth element... 10.. All best, Tsira
Well written, a beautiful picture. I have something about these things, but it's funny as usual. When I find it, I'll inform you.
The imagery is excellent. I can see you on the top a mountain shouting, I am Air. Water and Fire.
Very beautiful poem. Air, water and fire are the source of power. Love it,10+
You are an artist, TJ, with brush in hand and the wisdom and insight to see what the ordinary person does not. With that brush you take us on an extraordinary journey. I will watch your work with joy! A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A beautifully composed piece about the elements, I will be reading more of your work, well done, 10 Lynda xx