Akelapan Poem by smriti sharma

Akelapan

Rating: 5.0


Mai akela toh nahi tha,
ab kaise ho gaya?
Maano sab kuch ek pal mai kho gaya,
Zindgi ki hakikat saamne aayi,
Sab bhram mit gaya,
Sacchai chaayi..
Kyun maan raha tha khud ko sabse sukhi?
Uss guroor k saamne ab nazrein jhuki,
Ab chain bass tab hi mil sakta hai,
Mit jaayein iss dil ki diary k panne sabhi..
Uss shor ki toh maano manzil hi dhah gayi,
ab toh bass akelapan accha lagta hai..
WO hansi, wo shor..ab hume kahan jachta hai?
Kash! kyun na hum pahle se hi akele hote
kyun ye bojh jhoothi yaadon ka dhote..
Na aaye ab yahan koi aur
mai dekhna chahta hu ab duniya ka chhor
iss dukh k liye
khuda maine kyun wo sab sukh saha? ? ?
Mai Akela toh nahin tha
ab kaise ho gaya? ? ?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My lonliness kills me every second
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhinaba Sen 30 November 2012

oh why do u feel lonely every second eh?

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Ramesh Rai 30 November 2012

Hindi mein likhna achhi baat hai. meri bhi kuchh kavitayen hindi men hai. you must read. lekin kuch hindi kavi usme purane style ka write dekhna chahate hai. jise tukbandi bhi kaha jata hai, jaise last word identical ho. jo main nahi karpata. Any way do not take it so. In my opinion that is old style. Mere anusar kavitaon mein bhavanaon ka prawah hona chahiye. ek baar mere face book mein adverse comment bhi aaya. I praise your endeavor. good write with good emotion. keep it up without caring any comment. but do not disturb your other work like study etc. only for poem. wish you all the best.

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Muhammad Mirash 30 November 2012

i not understood it compleat because i have only studied hindi in high school.but it is nice

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Vipins Puthooran 30 November 2012

lonliness is a shelter/ good poem! !

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Utsav Patel 30 November 2012

Its very nice dear... Keep on work... Do good... :)

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Ahad 17 March 2022

Akelapan

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Akelapan by Ahad 17 March 2022

Akela hai tu, akela hi tujhe rahna parega

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Abii Sharma 07 February 2014

niceee i also write in thiss topic aapko zarur padhni chahiye meri poem :)

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Smriti Sharma 30 November 2012

@utsav patel: thanks utsav..for apperication

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Smriti Sharma 30 November 2012

@ramesh rai: thank you sir for your advice..

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