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Hasmukh Amathalal
(11/14/2009 5:09:00 AM) |
when the darkness is gone
i heard your first call
i saw you and I realized
“ am still alive”..ya it reminds one of true love.. this is reality and hastoascertain it.. lovely crfafted poem.....10
read mine... yes yes yes... yes to to
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Obinna Eruchie
(11/2/2009 11:16:00 AM) |
Hearing that voice, the reason to be delighted to feel glad inside to know how he is. An interesting verse to read.
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Rafique Farooqi
(11/2/2009 4:28:00 AM) |
Long live grace......you have wiped haze of disappointments with your artful write......you are able to write any type of poem very strongly
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Sahar Sahar
(11/2/2009 12:34:00 AM) |
I am feeling alive after reading this beautiful poem10++++++++
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