Alive Poem by lady grace

Alive

Rating: 4.4


in the midst of darkness
where no one is awake
i saw your image
i felt your presence..

when the darkness is gone
i heard your first call
i saw you and I realized
“ am still alive”.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sahar Sahar 02 November 2009

I am feeling alive after reading this beautiful poem10++++++++

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 December 2009

Jocund and in cute way… Enjoyed much in small [poem]… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 November 2009

when the darkness is gone i heard your first call i saw you and I realized “ am still alive”..ya it reminds one of true love.. this is reality and hastoascertain it.. lovely crfafted poem.....10 read mine... yes yes yes... yes to to

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Obinna Eruchie 02 November 2009

Hearing that voice, the reason to be delighted to feel glad inside to know how he is. An interesting verse to read.

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Rafique Farooqi 02 November 2009

Long live grace......you have wiped haze of disappointments with your artful write......you are able to write any type of poem very strongly

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Eyan Desir 02 November 2009

Grace! Its better to be alive than death...But even in death there is hard work...No time to relax... Keep smiling

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