Acceptance Poem by lady grace

Acceptance

Rating: 5.0


like a moon, it shines
like a star, it twinkles
like a sun, it dries
tears from her eyes...

to the sea it goes
to the river it flows
a falls of desire
from too much love...

love should be watered
it should be cared
it should be wrapped
and should be spoken...

acceptance follows

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aziz Alkaabi 03 July 2009

Good flow and fine words.

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Tobias Gray 03 July 2009

so beautiful! the words just floated! Great write!

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Merna Ibrahim 03 July 2009

A wonderful poem and a wonderful title too.......keep it up. Merna

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 July 2009

I accept what all you say to get that 'Love'.

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Surya . 03 July 2009

rightly said. love should be accepted for its further flow voted10 surya

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Rafique Farooqi 30 October 2009

lt is accepted emotion always................and wonderful

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i love love and i accept love.. love is good.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2009

love should be watered it should be cared it should be wrapped and should be spoken........accept it with grace and downot allow it wated down.. gentle touch with emotional careandshe is certainly yours... so lovable poem with heart felt feelings.. i loved it....10 read mine mary to marry.....mis i miss u....a place called home

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 July 2009

sweet....like a soft -flowing brook..flowing with tranquility flowing with passion and desire... brings lightness to one's heart... really fine to read...acceptance without conditions 10++ lovelots, maia

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Djinnga Fairbairn 16 July 2009

it is refreshing to read these lines... the outline of feelings is well defined...the overall context has a lightness to it...pleasant read...thank you....

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