Alone Poem by Vanessa Kingsley

Alone

Rating: 5.0


Alone
The wind blows hard as the sky grows dark. The moon shines full; a lazy halo surronds it becuas eif the swirling mist.
Lights are out, streets are quiet. I am alone.
The world is silent. The darkness moves. Nothing at all is here.
The raven crows and dark clouds pass over the moon.
The body lays motionless and leaks blood.
It is crimson against the black concrete and swirls in a puddle.
The wind blows harder, your heart grows colder.
The concrete seems to fill you.
Your mind slips.
There is nothing now.
The world is gone
Nothing is quiet.
The knife lies beside you.
everything is gone.
Black. Cold. Silent. Nothing.
Rain begins to pour.
The moon shines upon you.
The stars go out.
You are left to die. And you are now alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Singh 28 July 2009

Very well written, lonliness is killing.

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oh! ! ! really dark.... alone...... wonderfully written..... i just like it.... go on! ! ! !

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Anita Wisniewska 12 April 2009

very macabre hope just fantasy!

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Vinod Kumar 17 February 2009

A Present Perfect picture of the Past mid aged globe, thanks,10+

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Vanessa Kingsley

Vanessa Kingsley

Colorado Springs, Colorado
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