Alone Poem by Allison Unknown

Alone

Rating: 5.0


In the dark
I cant see anything
No noises
No movements
I wonder
Where I am
I take
Steps into the darkness
My footsteps
Make no noises
I reach out
Trying to feel
For something
But no contact is made
With my fingers
In this darkness
I am alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 25 November 2009

Nice work, while in the darkness we closed our eyes deeply there would be opened another world, thanks 10+

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Evaughn Gray 24 November 2009

This is a good poem, I liked it. ~ Hazel Green Eyes ^.^

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Robbie Squires 24 November 2009

This is very good because it made me think. If you can't see it how do u know it's there? The same goes for darkness, if u can't see anything how do u know where ur at? Very good job

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Sherbanu Molu 20 November 2009

wow fantastic, looks like she really is allonnnnnnnne!

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Joseph Poewhit 18 November 2009

Words have an eerie being about alone

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