Candy words
melting in your mouth.
Too proud
to say them aloud?
Yet you sigh,
you moan out loud.
Still they find a way
to leave, though
you did not mean
to dropp them out.
And you hope,
all will vaporize unheard -
lapses of an eager heart...
nice poem to fall back upon again and again and the more you read it aloud the more silently it pervades one's sensibility. liked it very much...
Wow, a dramatically captured state of mind with heart in it. CP
Very pretty presentation of how an ordinary occurrence can somehow become illuminated in our minds. The final 3 lines are blinding, the imagery of vapourising is superb! Love it Onelia. HG: -) xx
lapses of an eager heart... ....................................... Clever and warm poem... 10..... Tsira
Unique imagery in your first two lines alone had me engrossed, and I was right to be so..... t x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely ONe.. tis like chewing watermelon flavoured bubblegum... you can't help but work your tongue to seek the formation of the biggest bubble.. out.. then POP... loud and clear.. you do it over.. aroha xx