Always On Cue Poem by Ernestine Northover

Always On Cue

Rating: 5.0


Life should be in tune with you,
A gentle song, always on cue,
Soft lingering smile, by pleasure kissed,
Sunbeams that pierce the early mist.

Listening to the chorus of birds at dawn,
Glimpsing blossom on a wild hawthorn,
Laughter pulsating through the veins,
Happiness filled with sweet refrains.

Feeling such balance and harmony,
When I'm with you, and you're with me.
Life should be in tune with you,
A gentle song, always on cue.

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A gentle, sweet, refreshing ode; and well-crafted, too. A breath of fresh air!

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Brian Dorn 10 July 2006

Ernestine, your poetry is forever in tune and right on cue. Great poem! ! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 10 July 2006

At last a poem with your title, always on cue, well tuned and a real pleasure to know Love duncan X

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ERNESTINE...IN THE LITERARY CIRCUIT, I HERE-TELL THAT ONE DOES NOT OVER EXPRESS WHEN CRITIQUEING...DON'T KNOW WHO IN GOD'S NAME MADE TIS RULE../HOWEVER THE TERM'ACCOMPLISHED ' IS THAT WHICH I REFER TO...AND IT IS THAT TERM THAT I DO NOT USE LIBERALLY, AS I HAVE BEEN WARNED BY THE POETRY gODS NOT TO DO SO....HOWEVER, THIS PIECE, TITLED(And very aproposly, i might add) 'AKWAYS ON CUE' IN MY OPINION QUALIFIES AS A MOST ACCOMPLISHED LITERARY WORK.....FRANK/FJR

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***** ********* 15 July 2006

Ernestine, you describe the perfect balance that love gives life in harmony, so beautifully, keat would be proud of this wonderful poem indeed. You are truly, 'Always on Que'. Smiling at you, Tai

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Stephen Stirk 16 March 2009

How delightful. A short uplifter for anyone feeling down Steve .

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Lynda Robson 30 May 2008

I'm glad I found this one Ernestine, it is hauntingly beautiful, a pleasure to read, Lynda xx

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Andrew Blakemore 10 March 2008

Sunbeams that pierce the early mist is a brilliant line, lovely imagery here. Andrew x

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Uriah Hamilton 20 July 2006

Very hopeful and serene.

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Mary Nagy 15 July 2006

I loved this Ernestine. I love when we actually are overcome with this feeling of life being in tune....and right on cue! Like things are actually as they should be. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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