Life should be in tune with you,
A gentle song, always on cue,
Soft lingering smile, by pleasure kissed,
Sunbeams that pierce the early mist.
Listening to the chorus of birds at dawn,
Glimpsing blossom on a wild hawthorn,
Laughter pulsating through the veins,
Happiness filled with sweet refrains.
Feeling such balance and harmony,
When I'm with you, and you're with me.
Life should be in tune with you,
A gentle song, always on cue.
© Ernestine Northover
Ernestine, your poetry is forever in tune and right on cue. Great poem! ! Brian
At last a poem with your title, always on cue, well tuned and a real pleasure to know Love duncan X
ERNESTINE...IN THE LITERARY CIRCUIT, I HERE-TELL THAT ONE DOES NOT OVER EXPRESS WHEN CRITIQUEING...DON'T KNOW WHO IN GOD'S NAME MADE TIS RULE../HOWEVER THE TERM'ACCOMPLISHED ' IS THAT WHICH I REFER TO...AND IT IS THAT TERM THAT I DO NOT USE LIBERALLY, AS I HAVE BEEN WARNED BY THE POETRY gODS NOT TO DO SO....HOWEVER, THIS PIECE, TITLED(And very aproposly, i might add) 'AKWAYS ON CUE' IN MY OPINION QUALIFIES AS A MOST ACCOMPLISHED LITERARY WORK.....FRANK/FJR
Ernestine, you describe the perfect balance that love gives life in harmony, so beautifully, keat would be proud of this wonderful poem indeed. You are truly, 'Always on Que'. Smiling at you, Tai
How delightful. A short uplifter for anyone feeling down Steve .
I'm glad I found this one Ernestine, it is hauntingly beautiful, a pleasure to read, Lynda xx
Sunbeams that pierce the early mist is a brilliant line, lovely imagery here. Andrew x
I loved this Ernestine. I love when we actually are overcome with this feeling of life being in tune....and right on cue! Like things are actually as they should be. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A gentle, sweet, refreshing ode; and well-crafted, too. A breath of fresh air!