in my last birth
i was all in all
a tagore...a bharathi
all in me...an all in all POET
the words used to queue
in front of me....and
only the one's i pick along
would go to make a song
the breeze
on hearing my song
would wait.there....
for me to call it to...
to dance along
for my song
which i would ignore
a donkey i would prefer
i would call a donkey
to dance along
for my song
and that's me
the arrogance in me
i like this... amused me..made me smile very original thoughts brilliant as always.... 10++ Lovelots, Maia
Very original my brother...and crafted by a natural...it has the smile factor to it, you never fail to impress bro...your poetry stands in a league of it's own...well done 10+++
I love your arrogance, SLN! A true poet has every right to be arrogant. Angel
Well, all I can say it, you should keep being arrogant, if all these poems are the result of that! cheers, Patti
I feel sorry for the breeze being ignored in place of a donkey. I guess this is because donkeys are stubborn and this is where arrogance comes into the poem. I highly original and interesting poem Samanyan. 10 love Karin
A very arrogant poem from a very arrogant writer. Just kidding samanyan, was a very good write. I liked it. Your friend Lynn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i likes this poem much, it was interesting to read, and different too