And I Really Miss You Poem by M. Asim Nehal

And I Really Miss You

Rating: 5.0


I have kept a candle of tears burning with hope,
that you will come to me someday.

My body is pumping blood like a volcano,
taking a breath like a hurricane.

I think about you like lightning in the sky,
An imagination comes out like waves in the ocean.

My foot takes up the flight of an eagle,
Hands write about you like the slide from snow.

Ah, when this evening arrives,
Dips me deep in 'sea of sorrow',

I think about you & miss you.
Tears come out like falling raindrops,

Loneliness surrounds me like the wind,
And I really miss you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Jack 19 July 2020

Yes Loneliness surrounds like the wind- 365 degree. Great one MAN.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 February 2019

HOW I WISH SOME ONE MISSED ME TOO AS DO YOU M A N WONDERFUL I'D MISS U IF YOU DON'T READ MY POEMS WHICH I KNOW YOU WOULD NEVER DISAPPOINT ME OR WOULD YOU DEAR POET M.A.N

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 23 February 2019

A touching poem nicely penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2019

A candle of tear is burning and this is expressing emotion. Tear is interestingly compared with rain drops. This poem is excellently penned with beauty and care.10

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Susheela Shiju 23 February 2019

Oh! beautiful! this goes to My poem list! thanks for sharing!

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