And If It's Love Poem by Marieta Maglas

And If It's Love

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If it is love, and whispers touch the river's wave,
And if it's hope, but the sun's rays can hit your eye,
As well as the diamond tips in ring words engrave,
It's not for you to get your secrets very high,
It is for you to hold me tight, this love to save.

But if it's woe, and flowing sighs may touch your heart,
And if it's love, but gray clouds swoop across the sky,
As well as sad ideas you may take apart,
It's not for you to change your mind and start to cry,
It is for you to keep love's dream as time goes by.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Monday, September 3, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: poets
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written after reading the poem ‘' AND IF'' by Mihai Eminescu, our Romanian national poet.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 04 September 2012

Love's dream is the souvenir that keeps hope of love ever alive to wipe away tears!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 September 2012

The first few lines are very attractive as the love itself and we have to keep loving! so beautiful!

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Von Klassique 28 October 2012

WOW! I could feel the words... So lively and factual. You're a great poet indeed, ma'am!

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 05 September 2012

Great lines that flow with ease of expression. Clouds will pass and over, love shall float. I like this poem

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Rajendran Muthiah 04 September 2012

Metaphorical expression sparkles with wonderful comparisons. If it is love, whispers of the breeze kiss the waves and grey clouds swoop across the sky.

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Rajendran Muthiah 04 September 2012

If it is love, whispers of the breeze kiss the waves. Gray clouds swoop across the sky. Hold her tight to save the love and its dreams. It is hope when rays of the Sun hit one's eyes. Metaphorical expression sparkles.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 04 September 2012

The poem is so..o.. sweet. I'll read it again and again

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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