Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 22,531 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

...and 'now' I lay me down to sleep.
Before on more nerves of readers I keep.
And when I arise after getting some 'shut eye'...
I 'may' seek to annoy others with my point of view.
Or choose to be adorable...
To turn the stomachs of a few!

Comments about ...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Freshman - 786 Points Patti Masterman (8/18/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    I know the feeling. Just breathing air drives some crazy. Cute poem. (smile) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/3/2009 6:14:00 PM)

    a cute poem..i liked it..iam ready for your mood and your voint of view..10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,076 Points C. P. Sharma (6/1/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Beauty in diversity.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/31/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    well this is an interesting and amusing write indeed

    ' 'may' seek to annoy others with my point of view.'
    well you know what..some times this happen to me too...but now i v given up on trying to prove my points..every one is entitled to have their own opinions..nice short one sir

    liked it very much

    best wishes
    with love shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (5/29/2009 1:17:00 PM)

    Very amusing write Lawrence....thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tia Maria (5/21/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    Either way - you are very entertaining - tis true! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 21, 2009

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