it is rolling, now, and it is carrying you
are looking for a pretext,
to finish or to throw to the table.
'it like the smoke' - and you, are not burning
the meeting costs the waste of time
you are compensating for your the win
we are slowly immersing ourselves.
you are opening eyes, other world
underwater a starfish is tempting
distance on arm's length you have
her, even when a dream ends
she will stay for you when you are willing
you have it... other world underwater...
There's a real feel to this magical piece, another fine write
I felt as I was under water doing scuba diving.................Good Write................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent and real. It is worthwhile reading! I lke it very much. DA