Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,791 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Another Lucid Dream - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

As the scalpel
cuts through my flesh
I am wide awake

As the surgeon tells me
that I will survive
I feel the pain
as he slices through my fingers

As I rise from the table
the surgeon steps back
with a fright

I tell him
I've just realised
I'm lucid dreaming
so I'll see him another time

It's now time
for me to awake from sleeping


Comments about Another Lucid Dream by Dave Alan Walker

  • Silver Star - 3,249 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/26/2013 5:23:00 AM)

    an amazing poem in dream....and out of it (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,809 Points Smoky Hoss (6/16/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    Vivid dreams, like this poem, are amazing. I can't help pondering what it is our mind, or our heart, is saying to us in dreams such as this. I truly like this poem Dave, very good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Philip Carter (6/9/2013 5:39:00 PM)

    Scary dream, love it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (6/7/2013 6:16:00 AM)

    Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (6/7/2013 6:16:00 AM)

    Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,523 Points Valerie Dohren (6/4/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    Sounds more like a nightmare rather than a dream - definitely scary. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/3/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Surgeons do operate now with the patient awake so how do you know its not a dream, scary. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/2/2013 5:43:00 PM)

    haha bit funny with amazing unique style...well done, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 1, 2013


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