As the scalpel
cuts through my flesh
I am wide awake
As the surgeon tells me
that I will survive
I feel the pain
as he slices through my fingers
As I rise from the table
the surgeon steps back
with a fright
I tell him
I've just realised
I'm lucid dreaming
so I'll see him another time
It's now time
for me to awake from sleeping
haha bit funny with amazing unique style...well done, thanks for sharing
Surgeons do operate now with the patient awake so how do you know its not a dream, scary.
Vivid dreams, like this poem, are amazing. I can't help pondering what it is our mind, or our heart, is saying to us in dreams such as this. I truly like this poem Dave, very good.
Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.
Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sounds more like a nightmare rather than a dream - definitely scary.