Love amongst the maple trees
buckets in hand
is a very messy business,
but the best in all the land
For where else may one taste syrup
fresh as manna from above
beside the one who stickies your heart
with sweet n' sappy looove......
(3.4.06)
Well here's a poem that's left me a sweet, sticky taste in the mouth! ! (Really, Esther) . Delightful, Esther. Warm regards and a score of 9 from Gina.
Mmm, yummy. Great imagery, very cute and not soppy at all. Well done. Hugs Anna xxx
I ran like sap in the spring to see what this poem is all about. The best part, you've left out - the steamy, lengthy, condensing to pure sweetness. Seriously, I am jones'n for some waffles now. Or maybe pancakes. - chuck
Hot Boiling Syrup, Essemee! ! Do you see what monsters C. T. has created? ? Heaven help us both. Scarlett
Love and the country life. It doesn't get much better than this Esther. x jim
A cute and delightful write that's covered in gooey sentiment; nicely done.
Just love this one, Esther. You ooooze out of every line in all your sweet sappiness and joy. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Nicely written it went... With flourishing lovely thought out intent. Liked the poem-Keep it up-God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delightful use of words! Patricia