Aquarium Dreams Poem by Ted Sheridan

Aquarium Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Dreamland was about to become very nightmarish
In as much as the car in which we all were riding
Exceeded the careful demands of a sharp and winding curve
Thereby breaching the protective guardrail and plunging off the cliff
One hundred and fifty feet into the deep dark waters
Below
I survived the ordeal only to see the others drowning
With their eyes bulging as so many innocent guppies
About to be devoured by some ancient creature of the deep
The water’s pressure crushing their precious little lungs
And each releasing their final and last breath before descending
Deeper
But you being a cold blooded amphibious creature
All scaly like a fish and with a powerful reptilian tongue
Reached out for me from the cold water beneath my feet
And placing a firm and debilitating grasp on both my legs you pulled me
Undertow
A heavier handed metaphor than I’d ever before
Imagined

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 24 November 2007

With each read I get a new suggestion of its meaning. And so, this powerful piece will be revisited again. Danny

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Tom J. Mariani 24 November 2007

Doesn't matter if this scene really happened or if it was an Aquarium Dream. Some of us need more help than others, and some get no help at all resisting 'Undertow.' A gripping metaphor especially for me having grown up on the Northern California coast. I have felt the icey Pacific waters pull at my knees while pulling the sand out from underneath my feet. I learned it works both ways as my great-grandfather taught me to surf-fish with huge hand-hend nets. We were the undertow. Tom

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