Are You Really Better Without Me? ........[wondering About A 'lost' Love; Short; Reactivated May 2022, After Being Inactive For Years] Poem by Bri Edwards

Are You Really Better Without Me? ........[wondering About A 'lost' Love; Short; Reactivated May 2022, After Being Inactive For Years]

Rating: 5.0


I wonder who rubs now your shoulder.
Will you miss me when you are older?
Will you think of me then?
Will you remember when….
with me in bed it was LESS colder?


(2006)

Sunday, December 23, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: bittersweet love,loneliness,unknown
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
what can i say? i was 'between' engagements. i AM a heat machine, and it is not ALL from gas! ! [added 2022: This poem seems to have foretold a possibility for my future a few years in advance! ]
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayman Parray 19 December 2015

If only you were a bit bolder And in your arms, you would hold her She would love you then If at that time when 'I love you', you would have told her I enjoyed this one Bri, but in my experience wondering about a 'Lost' love only brings pain and suffering. I think you should heed to Master Yoda's wise counsel when he says that 'Fear is the path to the dark side, fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate and hate leads to suffering'.

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Urshula Davis 22 June 2013

Awwwwww this has a flow about it that i respect! Salute!

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Ruth Walters 12 February 2013

so true - she does miss you, I'm sure and now she has to pay out for an electric blanket too ;)

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eloida Capuno 26 January 2013

This is kinda cute. It makes light of a hurting heart.

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