Artist Of Great Walls Of India Hussain Saab Poem by Thampi KEE

Artist Of Great Walls Of India Hussain Saab

Rating: 5.0


The wall surrounding us you painted,
Each creature look different colors but looked all too dissimilar
One was a mix and brige the cream of brown pair eyes
Each arm looks warm patches mimicking stains unevenly
Length spread across to our necks
The other girl loves to kiss had a fine blend with pasty dark thigh,
Both stood upright facing in opposite but do nothing

The scenery we wish was one it not on code of god
Yet one you wish to un head....of, so strangely but brutal to kill her
fascinating, love of your girl friend for that instant it had made me to love you

None turned and faced you but our prayer mates went into blur

The river’s looks bold and gully way it llos
Cool chill was at first, much a shocked me your exile
You painted all in one India, great walls of India

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 28 May 2012

Wonderful feelings and lovely description make the artist always alive. Great work my friend as always :)

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Swarnendu Biswas 08 August 2011

yah! the great artists never die, they live inside us in their creation.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 June 2011

You have paid a great tribute to late MFH's artistic qualities by painting the scene from your solid pen. Great imagery and wonderful style. A fine 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A farmer' on page 1.

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