Brian Taylor

Rookie - 133 Points (England)

Ashram Melody - Poem by Brian Taylor

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The best way of enough is all gone,
for that there is no arguement upon.

While ther is still something in the dish
there is, in Mind, propensity to wish.

Wishing is a film that spreads itself like jam
and turns the dullest pebble to a fragment of 'I AM'.


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  • Rookie - 379 Points Indira Renganathan (6/7/2009 1:35:00 AM)

    Suitable title...and the last lines speak everything...wonderful write (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 2 Points Wojja Fink (5/10/2009 3:32:00 PM)

    what a sweet melody...thank you John (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 18, 2013


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