jim hogg

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At Seventeen

I remember you when you were only seventeen
the sun was high above us then
and all the fields were green
and dressed in grey and white
the world was at your feet
but you'd no time for fame or lights
you were myth made real
and every part of me believed

I remember dancing in your arms at Christmas time
the local band played Maggie May;
the world was out of sight
and you were harmony
in every move you made
and I was just a teenage fool
with sense enough to pray
that I might spend some time with you

(chorus)
And now you've crossed the great divide
Your pain is gone, at such a price
And I will think of you, in grey and white,
I will think of you on autumn nights
I will think of you at Christmas time
And I'll think of when your lips touched mine
And I'll remember you at seventeen
When the sun was high
and all the fields were green


I remember you outside the gym when we were young
your eyes were full of sunshine,
there was passion on your tongue
I didn't have the words
to tell you how I felt
but still you took my hand, and walked
where love rose and fell
and I'll remember when we touched

And now you've crossed the great divide
Your pain is gone, at such a price
And I will think of you, in grey and white,
I will think of you on autumn nights
I will think of you at Christmas time
And I'll think of when your lips touched mine
And I'll remember you at seventeen
When the sun was high
and all the fields were green

13 03 2010

jim hogg
Submitted: Tuesday, February 14, 2012


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  • Jake Deeds (2/22/2012 1:03:00 AM)

    The great divide......I have never thought of it in this light.....perfection! ! ! [][

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  • Tsira Gogeshvili (2/17/2012 2:32:00 AM)

    Hi Jim,
    Beautiful lovely-sonorous a song about the past about which you worry so late
    I agree lines:

    and I was just a teenage fool
    with sense enough to pray
    that I might spend some time with you
    10.........................................................

    ... There is no doubt that you were fantastic pair
    would be good if you start thinking of music about it by any way....
    Tsira

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