Autumn Treasure Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Autumn Treasure Haiku

Rating: 4.4


Autumn leaves falling

creating a brown carpet

mushrooms spring upwards

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

They say the awe of nature is reflected in Haiku. You have succeeded so well, the falling and upwards motion and the brown carpet paint a beautiful picture in my mind. 10 Karin Anderson

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A 1 24 March 2009

I like this poem very much! It reminds me of the delights and observations of children.

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Chitra - 28 January 2009

glints of hope skittering across that brown carpet wonderful

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 January 2009

A wonderful haiku.... A real autumn treasure. ' Autumn leaves falling ' and ' Mushrooms spring upward '..... A beautiful contrast....10/10. Regards Naseer

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Hello my Haiku Poet...another good one! 10....Ah!

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