Awake... Not Alert... (Humor) Poem by elysabeth faslund

Saw my all-time-favorite tee shirt the other day...it said: I AM UP AND DRESSED - WHAT MORE DO YOU WANT? ? ?

Nice shift - no, yes, no, yes.

A wild and woolly game of word penned with a wickedly dry sort of humour. I suspect this is the morning after a long, sleepless night. Interesting how incredibly creative that 'not quite right' place is. Love this. allie xxxxx

A nice depressing poem that does catch you off guard and explains it all nice one enjoyed the read

That's a man with a big and lasting impact! ! A woman's world! - too complex for men to cope with, and far too demanding that's for sure, given that most of the brave genes were no doubt killed off trying to kill the next meal many thousands of years ago, leaving the brights dodgers of challenge that spin/wobble the world now. Seems to me you were pretty alert when you wrote this. Inventive, funny and skilfully put together. Liked this one too. xx jim

You must be exhausted and flushed from the thirty minute rush! ! ! ! good one...marci.xo