saadat tahir

Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Awkward Little Silences … 2801-2k13 - Poem by saadat tahir

Ah! Clarion be the notes
Spring's calling everywhere
As feelings run untamed
Throbs seek their due fare

Melody of nervous laughs
with tinkle of springs pair
awkward little silences
the blurt of moments share

those spoken giddy words
spin heady mix of knots
the mornings chirpy birds
now flutter to dispel blots

as swirling mists clear
give way to warming rays
nights hold squalid breaths
and promise spurs the days


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28th Jan,2k13
Islamabad.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Hope and anticipation can do wonders...

Comments about Awkward Little Silences … 2801-2k13 by saadat tahir

  • Bronze Star - 2,845 Points Hans Vr (3/3/2013 6:19:00 AM)

    A pleasureto read this joyful poem.Uplifting. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Roongratt Srimanchantha (2/28/2013 6:56:00 AM)

    Beautifully written! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Reader (1/28/2013 2:39:00 PM)

    (((Hope and anticipation can do wonders..........))) .
    it's the loveliest! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    :))) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (1/28/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    absolutely original, doc! one of those rare poems of urs that i could understand without much difficulty :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 799 Points Yasmeen Khan (1/28/2013 9:46:00 AM)

    a warm message of hope (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 28, 2013



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