saadat tahir

Rookie - 922 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Unguarded word......think before u speak!


Unguarded word, befriended bird.
Weighted fell by thrice or third.
Dusty grind, millers churn.
Pummel ears, murmurs burn.

Mongered word off china town,
bamboos morph to fretting frown.
Snared enmeshed, wasted sage,
bowl of death at generous age.

Placid morns to sullied days,
rancid slicks on sandy bays.
Bubbly sprays dash and bounce,
buffet sighs in crannies trounce.

Tongues to airs, wings have lent.
Hath words to many, a gallows sent.
Deadened eyes to rainbows womb,
spured fear to tear to life entomb.

Strongest will and hardy soul.
Char and writhe on carmine coal.
Words said, unsaid, worlds apart.
Volley's sent, will raze ramparts


(Islamabad)
(Aug 01,2009)

Submitted: Saturday, August 01, 2009
Edited: Thursday, August 30, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Unguarded word......think before u speak! by saadat tahir )

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/15/2011 5:03:00 AM)

    excellent poem.........its superb sir sat......
    poem presents ur message in an emphatic manner so i like it very much & also word association supports ur thinking & thought very much
    i think i rate this poem more than 10000000000000 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/8/2010 12:47:00 AM)

    Don’t let hang loose your tongue…if you do so you’ll be …well you all know …excellent stuff…perfect wording…loved it Mr. Poet Saadat
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 302 Points Indira Renganathan (9/16/2009 4:28:00 AM)

    Dear Saadat, there is a hidden rhyme zone and a dictionary inside your head and heart wherefrom spring forth perfectly strung colourful garlands of words.. I like the title which teaches the effectiveness of the unguarded word by the following poem...you are a master..I salute....thanks for your comment too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (8/14/2009 12:51:00 PM)

    Hello Saadat..

    I haven't read too much thought provoking ones recently....
    Just turned to your page, ...
    I should say this poem got the usual Saadat Tahir flavor in it....

    Strongest will and hardy soul.
    Char and writhe on carmine coal.
    Words said, unsaid, worlds apart.
    Volley’s sent, will raze ramparts

    Very strong and powerful, diction here....
    and you are very professional when it comes to composing poems..
    Great....

    Cheeers
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 266 Points Ruth Walters (8/13/2009 4:26:00 PM)

    loose tongue and lip eh......liked your poem Saadat...

    Ruthy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/13/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    A dazzling quatrains with a great rhyme scheme......powerful and profound! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 836 Points Sadiqullah Khan (8/12/2009 1:17:00 AM)

    I agree with Mamta and Amaryllius, there are strong words here, getting into deeper images. Rhyming is fine,10 ++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Seema Aarella (8/12/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    'A great write' i must say! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (8/11/2009 2:49:00 PM)

    Unguarded word...agree with you..though I should be true I often speak before I think..but I work on it.. :) your way with words always amazes me and makes me recite your poems immediately to listen how they sound in air, and to feel the power of sounds on an emotional level..and then to read it some times to get more into an idea..always deep and encouraging..thanks for sharing, Saadat.
    Amary. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/11/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    Fine imageries fine expressions!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (8/10/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    think before u speak! , nice idea
    well penned poem too
    Luwi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (8/9/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    nicely done.'think before u speak is a good habit.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (8/7/2009 1:09:00 PM)

    will do sir...! ! let me think............hmmmm.... and may i say...great poetry here...! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (8/7/2009 11:03:00 AM)

    Sadaat you really have a way with words- charming indeed, i am sure in speech as well as in writing. you come out with most unusual images, and there is always a stroke of your humour in your poems. whenever i read your poems, i have to read them aloud, becuase listening enhances the pleasure.

    weell to use a cliche unmindful speech hurts more than a wound by an arrow.

    mindfulness in speech is the basis of healthy relationships and dialogue.

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,827 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2009 7:45:00 PM)

    Strongest will and hardy soul.
    Char and writhe on carmine coal.
    Words said, unsaid, worlds apart.
    Volley’s sent, will raze ramparts
    lovley style and easy to rememebr the advice.. iloved it to the extent and enjoyed....10

    read mine goden words..prayer..o lord (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/3/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    I love your writing style.You do have a way with words.Beautiful poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brishti Mazumdar (8/3/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    Tongues to airs, wings have lent.
    Hath words to many, a gallows sent.
    Deadened eyes to rainbows womb,
    spured fear to tear to life entomb.

    Oh! ....strong words...well conceived....liked your thought process...10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (8/2/2009 3:20:00 AM)

    wise thoughts beautifuly played with beautiful dancing rhymes..loved it..

    Placid morns to sullied days,
    rancid slicks on sandy bays.
    Bubbly sprays dash and bounce,
    buffet sighs in crannies trounce.

    Tongues to airs, wings have lent.
    Hath words to many, a gallows sent.
    Deadened eyes to rainbows womb,
    spured fear to tear to life entomb. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Bindu Vidyadhar (8/1/2009 5:19:00 PM)

    A very nice theme put in a rhythmic rhymy way
    Of words uttered when we succumb to sway
    Let all unkind words die inside
    Never to another person deride (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ritty Patnaik (8/1/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    very well penned poem, sadat.it is very important to use the right word, in right time.that is why they say, think before you say, dont say what you think.best wishes.
    ritty (Report) Reply

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