Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 43 Points (Montenegro)

Baby Blue You'Ve Got You - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

All the guests are gone
Silence on the glass brims
Their laughter will fade out
Their footsteps will be swallowed
By clear night sky

You can close the door
There they are no more

You can say ‘That’s it.’
They won’t care a bit.

All whispers are taken
Silence on the glass brims
Growing into dark
When the lights turn off
Window panes stand broken

You can close them down
They will give no sound

You’ll say ‘It’s ok.’
Try sleep for the day.


Comments about Baby Blue You'Ve Got You by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Gold Star - 6,620 Points Terry Craddock (11/21/2014 5:05:00 PM)

    i heard silence on glass brims fading laughter footsteps fading echoes of guests gone swallowed by shadow depths twinkling in a night sky burning like meteorites skimming off stratosphere bouncing off spent lines as my eyes sparkled diamonds galaxies surrounding a single hosted earth pulse companionship bubbling fleeting fleeting gone dust life squeaked spice sounds gathered spread tables symbolic symmetries (will format and dedicate it later, presently out and about on a misty grey day walking) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,851 Points Sandra Feldman (11/21/2014 4:50:00 AM)

    Seems the party is over. Very well suggested ambiance. The scene is seen like in a poetic dream.
    Good work! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,299 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (11/21/2014 4:06:00 AM)

    he true emotions of the hosts, once the guests left...Congratulation Miroslava Odalovic (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,299 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (11/21/2014 4:04:00 AM)

    the true emotions of the hosts, once the guests left...Congratulation Miroslava Odalovic (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,727 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (11/21/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    When the lights turn off
    Window panes stand broken

    Miroslava Odalovic once composed this poem three years ago the drop line shows. So many dimension....i simply enjoyed the lines. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,748 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/21/2013 7:40:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem with an eye catching title.
    'Their laughter will fade out
    Their footsteps will be swallowed
    By clear night sky'
    Oh, what a beautiful expression! Just loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,641 Points Savita Tyagi (11/21/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    Good poem. Guest gone blue returns! seems familiar! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (12/9/2012 8:33:00 PM)

    Try sleep for the day. Good poem.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points Unwritten Soul (11/29/2012 4:25:00 AM)

    I loved the title! ! ! and reading these lines make me occupied with some smiles hahahaha...i dont know but there is something pulling me to do that is than Unwritten hand pulling me? haha_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (11/21/2012 2:35:00 AM)

    Great poem, I like the imageries that keeps the reader involved. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 30, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, November 11, 2011


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