Miroslava Odalovic

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Baby Blue You've Got You


All the guests are gone
Silence on the glass brims
Their laughter will fade out
Their footsteps will be swallowed
By clear night sky

You can close the door
There they are no more

You can say ‘That’s it.’
They won’t care a bit.

All whispers are taken
Silence on the glass brims
Growing into dark
When the lights turn off
Window panes stand broken

You can close them down
They will give no sound

You’ll say ‘It’s ok.’
Try sleep for the day.

Submitted: Friday, September 30, 2011
Edited: Friday, November 11, 2011

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,680 Points Terry Craddock (11/21/2014 5:05:00 PM)

    i heard silence on glass brims fading laughter footsteps fading echoes of guests gone swallowed by shadow depths twinkling in a night sky burning like meteorites skimming off stratosphere bouncing off spent lines as my eyes sparkled diamonds galaxies surrounding a single hosted earth pulse companionship bubbling fleeting fleeting gone dust life squeaked spice sounds gathered spread tables symbolic symmetries (will format and dedicate it later, presently out and about on a misty grey day walking) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,605 Points Sandra Feldman (11/21/2014 4:50:00 AM)

    Seems the party is over. Very well suggested ambiance. The scene is seen like in a poetic dream.
    Good work! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,544 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (11/21/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    When the lights turn off
    Window panes stand broken

    Miroslava Odalovic once composed this poem three years ago the drop line shows. So many dimension....i simply enjoyed the lines. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,072 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/21/2013 7:40:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem with an eye catching title.
    'Their laughter will fade out
    Their footsteps will be swallowed
    By clear night sky'
    Oh, what a beautiful expression! Just loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 841 Points Unwritten Soul (11/29/2012 4:25:00 AM)

    I loved the title! ! ! and reading these lines make me occupied with some smiles hahahaha...i dont know but there is something pulling me to do that is than Unwritten hand pulling me? haha_Soul (Report) Reply

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