Baby Blue You'Ve Got You Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Baby Blue You'Ve Got You

Rating: 3.4


All the guests are gone
Silence on the glass brims
Their laughter will fade out
Their footsteps will be swallowed
By clear night sky

You can close the door
There they are no more

You can say ‘That’s it.’
They won’t care a bit.

All whispers are taken
Silence on the glass brims
Growing into dark
When the lights turn off
Window panes stand broken

You can close them down
They will give no sound

You’ll say ‘It’s ok.’
Try sleep for the day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babatunde Aremu 21 November 2012

Great poem, I like the imageries that keeps the reader involved.

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Unwritten Soul 29 November 2012

I loved the title! ! ! and reading these lines make me occupied with some smiles hahahaha...i dont know but there is something pulling me to do that is than Unwritten hand pulling me? haha_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 09 December 2012

Try sleep for the day. Good poem.Thanks.

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Savita Tyagi 21 November 2013

Good poem. Guest gone blue returns! seems familiar!

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Khairul Ahsan 21 November 2013

A beautiful poem with an eye catching title. 'Their laughter will fade out Their footsteps will be swallowed By clear night sky' Oh, what a beautiful expression! Just loved it.

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Terry Craddock 21 November 2014

i heard silence on glass brims fading laughter footsteps fading echoes of guests gone swallowed by shadow depths twinkling in a night sky burning like meteorites skimming off stratosphere bouncing off spent lines as my eyes sparkled diamonds galaxies surrounding a single hosted earth pulse companionship bubbling fleeting fleeting gone dust life squeaked spice sounds gathered spread tables symbolic symmetries (will format and dedicate it later, presently out and about on a misty grey day walking)

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Sandra Feldman 21 November 2014

Seems the party is over. Very well suggested ambiance. The scene is seen like in a poetic dream. Good work!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 November 2014

he true emotions of the hosts, once the guests left...Congratulation Miroslava Odalovic

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 November 2014

the true emotions of the hosts, once the guests left...Congratulation Miroslava Odalovic

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Pranab K Chakraborty 21 November 2014

When the lights turn off Window panes stand broken Miroslava Odalovic once composed this poem three years ago the drop line shows. So many dimension....i simply enjoyed the lines.

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