Asif Andalib

Rookie (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

Baby tell me you love me Poem by Asif Andalib


Baby tell me you like me
Like a poet likes poetry

Baby tell me you love me
Like a flower loves a bee

Baby tell me you need me
Like a river needs a sea

Baby tell me you want me
Like a monkey wants a tree

Baby tell me you miss me
Like a sad heart misses glee

Submitted: Monday, November 05, 2012

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  • Freshman - 995 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (11/11/2012 10:32:00 AM)

    I like the way the lines rhyme... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (11/9/2012 3:57:00 PM)

    D rhymes are lovelym and so are the lines. They form a rhythm in one's head like a song does. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Marina Nothing (11/6/2012 5:45:00 PM)

    I really like it ^.^ nice job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omoloja Yusuf (11/6/2012 3:34:00 AM)

    Cool one. good rythym and flow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jaya Mishra (11/5/2012 11:13:00 AM)

    Great write...
    I liked ur comparisons and the flow indeed....
    Lovely! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,928 Points Hazel Durham (11/5/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with great rhythm and flow, great write! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,141 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/5/2012 3:31:00 AM)

    Ah wow fab sweet poem one of yor best indeed! My votes go to it. Cment on my newest pls. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Simon Odhiambo (11/5/2012 3:15:00 AM)

    Simple and straight. I love the repetition and the use of similes. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alla Simone (11/5/2012 2:26:00 AM)

    Cute, simple, but still able to evoke emotion. A pleasure to read. My favorite line is Baby tell me you need me like a river needs a sea. The next thought in my head was to flow into. The thought of someone needing you to flow into is very tender & denotes warm affection. I also like how this poem builds upon itself with like, love, need, want, miss. The natural progression of emotions s highlighted well. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kishor Sharma (11/5/2012 2:06:00 AM)

    Hi Asif sir,

    You write really well. congrats for being in top 500 poets. keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,158 Points Tiku . (11/5/2012 2:05:00 AM)

    beautiful ink.flow, rhyming and concept is nice.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sangnam Nam (11/5/2012 1:26:00 AM)

    Like a sad heart misses glee........

    ........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 185 Points Zahra Shariat (11/5/2012 1:23:00 AM)

    it sounds simple but nice! (Report) Reply

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