Tribhawan Kaul

Freshman - 558 Points (01-01-1946 / Srinagar (J & K) India)

Bad Company - Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Fatigued and exhausted home coming makes me restless
As if I am swallowed whole by the emptiness
Stacked famous ones whirl around, pity me
As termites start digesting me
Spider webs decorating walls
House lizards playing ball
Bed-bugs play hide & seek
Rats sprint on rugs
Mosquitoes sing
Buzzing
flies
Melodious
Cricket's chirping
Frog's croaking, all keep me
Awake whole night yet fill my emptiness
With their presence without which my life
Would have been one of emptiness and loneliness
Getting rid of them from the core threaten my existence
Yet I am bent upon driving them out to be with HIM in ONENESS
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A human being is imprisoned behind the four wall of seven/nine sins since attaining senses after the birth. The way out is to seek HIM.

Comments about Bad Company by Tribhawan Kaul

  • Gold Star - 25,150 Points Valsa George (11/2/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    Another great write! Like a spiritual seeker, you seem to be after real bliss, trying to annihilate the seven deadly sins! Let your quest be crowned with success! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Deepak Sawhney (9/15/2013 1:13:00 PM)

    Great power of expression. Enjoyed your style of writing. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (6/7/2013 6:22:00 AM)

    this is fantastic reverse etheree love it....10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (5/30/2013 8:50:00 PM)

    a nice poem full of hope. getting rid of bad company good idea they can pull one down with them. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 16, 2012


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