Sally Plumb Plumb

Veteran Poet - 1,069 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Bad Rivers - Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

It is January
and the moon cracks
with frost.
I light a candle
to thaw my thoughts.
They run in bad rivers
and I am caught
in a net of sorrow.

I'll cry tomorrow
when sunrise breaks
slowly
through the dark
to ask questions.

Sally Plumb


Comments about Bad Rivers by Sally Plumb Plumb

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (1/24/2014 6:02:00 PM)

    .........this is a great poem for today...cause it is January, the polar bear has returned...
    and it is so very cold with a temp of 20 brrr....think I would like a cup of hot chocolate
    now.....nice write :) (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,778 Points Dave Walker (5/30/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, really like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 151 Points James Timothy Jarrett (4/17/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    I read this one again and love it even more the second time around (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 151 Points James Timothy Jarrett (1/6/2013 11:01:00 PM)

    Sally, You make me laugh and cry. Screw all the crap that poetry Should be. Ha ha! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/9/2011 5:47:00 AM)

    [magnificient penning]
    Excellent imageries! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,767 Points Smoky Hoss (1/14/2011 5:32:00 PM)

    What a marvelous way of thinking beyond convention, I like it very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bert Bell (10/16/2010 12:04:00 AM)

    Beautiful use of metaphor and great imagery. Lovely, original idea. Very nice indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bert Bell (10/16/2010 12:04:00 AM)

    Beautiful use of metaphor and great imagery. Lovely, original idea. Very nice indeed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 12, 2010



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