Be Mine Poem by Heather Burns

Be Mine

Rating: 4.8


Be the king
of my heart
I'll be your
queen.

Be my star
I'll be your
star catcher

Gaze with me
at the moon
dawn will
break soon

Tomorrow
the sun will
shine
with you

The
brightness
of my day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2013

Great piece of work with the motivation of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Wahab Abdul 28 July 2013

very nice one, liked it for its concept and beautiful style...lovely

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Hazel Durham 28 July 2013

Beautiful, romantic shining with a love to cherish!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2013

Stars, moon, and the sun - all covered to express deep love. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Shahzia Batool 28 July 2013

very lucid and rich with emotions! liked it!

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Sallam Yassin 04 August 2013

very romantic gaze at the moon with me the dawn will break soon / kind of solidarity of love with your other soul so sweet

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2013

A lovely romantic poem.. Beautiful...Loved reading it.

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 August 2013

Very romantic poem- You are queen in poetry

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R.j. Wynn 31 July 2013

Very nice, and sweet. Love it.

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Valerie Dohren 31 July 2013

Delightful. A very sweet and romantic write.

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