Like roses on a bed
Two come together as one
Dancing to a beat
Circulating with
Lust or affection
Exciting, thrilling
Caring and warming
Romantically
Like sugar on a tongue
Two soak in pleasure as one
Continuously
And ejaculate
The words, I love you
June 23rd 2009
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The final two lines bring to the climax a description of the title of the piece very effectively. 10 for an interesting view on making love....... Fay.
Very good use of context, I like the meaning, and you have a good use of words. I love it it is very sensual! ! ! Great Work! : D
Most modestic poem of making love…you’ve tailored nicely… But sensuality may be better option for ‘lust’… Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful love poem i think you named yourself love doctor was good