Beauty Poem by sekharan pookkat

Beauty

Rating: 4.8


Duty is beauty
Where it is approved
Beauty is sweety
When it is loved
Sweety is adored
If you are in love
Love smashes all
To love each other

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 09 May 2013

the piece itself is a beauty......a wonder poem sir bravo

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Poetheart Morgan 09 May 2013

Always surrender your beauty without calculation, without words. Shut up. And she says about you: I am. And comes with a thousand senses, finally arrives each.   in The Book of Images, Rainer Maria Rilke, Book Second Part.

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Valsa George 10 May 2013

Great thoughts in capsule form! Love the beauty of it! !

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Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013

a beautiful poem about beauty. beauty is in the eyes of the beholder lovely write

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 July 2013

Wonderful...Great thoughts....Good write.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 09 June 2013

Thank you for the invitation to read your poem. I find it delightful and refreshing, but take particular notice of the word sweety (use here as adjective) and would prefer some other synonym to it, as it means sweetheart (noun) or an informal address for dear (also a noun) . Perhaps sincerity would be good, as Beauty is sincerity. Just my thoughts.

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Captain Cur 28 May 2013

Love smashed all. Great line, great poem.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 12 May 2013

You are right. That is how I love Everything, I mean Everything and that is why I am always happy.

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