Beg For Simplicity Poem by Elena Sandu

Beg For Simplicity

Rating: 5.0


My dear soul,
of Love!
Fly
over the mountains
with countless
shades of brown
and green
Away
from the things
of venetian
beauty
keep clean
the colours
taken within
butterfly swim
from one of each sea
the blue
the red or the green
Be fast back
please
find the tracks
of
simple
Me...


(...half soul of black)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 04 July 2012

Elegant and simply delicious poem, colorful and beautifully written.

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Wabi Sabi 06 July 2012

you will get the cycle and actually you already are.... don't worry, you are,

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winds with hair undone will seek reflections divine in hearts that are rinsed with love

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Hans Vr 09 July 2012

Wonderful aspirations, beautifully expressed. Very good poetry, Elena

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Kelly Seale 08 August 2012

Elena, your words with colors are delightful! Good Ink! -Kelly.

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Hamid Negah 05 August 2012

Elena, sentimental poem, very nice, i love it.

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Vipins Puthooran 29 July 2012

'tis a very beautiful poem! ! ! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 10 July 2012

its a freedom to the soul bestowing wisdom........wonderful poem

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Unwritten Soul 10 July 2012

Elena this is minunat poem, simplicity of elegance that was what you have done to this write.... half heart is black? ? ? do u know black is a mixture of all colors? so just convince yourself as all colors just painted in your heart, but yet you need to decide which is to be a dominant among others and that's a personality you will show...otherwise be a rainbow ;) _Unwritten Soul

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