Behold Of The Splendid Ev'Nin' Poem by Valerie Dohren
Behold Of The Splendid Ev'Nin'
Behold of the splendid ev’nin’
At the closin’ of the day;
The sun is a-slowly leavin’
And a-fadin’ soft away.
The mell’wing night is a-fallin’
So deep on the sleepy throng;
The birds are a-gently callin’ -
A-singin’ their sweet, sweet song.
All heads now are fast asleepin’
The land of dreams to abide;
All of their secrets a-keepin’
As within their beds they hide.
So until the bright new mornin’
In slumber all shall repose;
While awaitin’ for the dawnin’
When the daylight softly glows.
With all of the sunbeams dancin’
A-castin’ upon the trees;
And all of the birds a-prancin’
High a-flyin’ in the breeze.
So everyone then awake’nin’
Set to greet the comin’ day;
Of their secrets still a-keepin’
And a-hidin’ come what may.
O how very lyrical, and how very nicely Sandra Feldman has appreciated it.As usual, another very lovely verse.
Lovely verse, Valerie :) you stun me with your splendid write. -W
Terrific diction and the mood is excellent.Soft and heartwarming.
Soothing. A beautiful portrait with a good feel. Fantastic write.
A beautiful poem and so magnificently written. You so demurely dropped the g on the ending of some of the words which adds a lovely effect. Sounds like its going to be a good night for sleeping amidst all that calm. An excellent write Val.
This is an absilute masterpiece. So like the work of William Butler Yeats. Of whuch you ate un the same class val.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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So everyone then awake’nin’ Set to greet the comin’ day A poem of great rhythm and beauty. Thank you.